Summer Arrives , Dill,Scout, and Jem begin their games again.The first things they did is roll ew other in a tire.Scout rolls in front of the Radley steps, and Jem and Scout panic. , and because of what happened Jem got the idea for their next game called boo Radley.As the summer passes, their game becomes more diverse and deep into the game they act out the how Easley family.EventuallyAtticus catches them and asks if their game has anything to do with the Radely family. Jem lies to Atticus and He goes back inside.The kids wonder if it’s safe to play their game anymore.
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February 8, 2015 at 10:42 am
This is an excellent sentence opening: ‘As the summer passes, their game becomes more diverse and deep…’ It shows some of your personality as a writer.
You are beginning to show more and more that you have an understanding of events and characters.
Targets:
1) Always re-read and edit your posts – punctuate in order to make your meaning clearer.
2) Always use a supporting quotation.